Chase
• The thief grabbed my bag and dashed across the road, running like a mad horse on steroids. I immediately pelted towards the thief before pouncing on him and giving him my signature punch on his face that made him cry out in pain.
• The security guards gave chase like a group of Olympic athletes. In no time, they had caught up with the thief and handcuffed him.
• The snatch thief skedaddled away and disappeared round the corner. Upon seeing that, I immediately gave chase and scooted around the corner at the speed of the light. Soon, I narrowed the gap between the thief and me. Taking the opportunity, I sprinted towards him and threw myself on him.
Robbery
• Armed with rifles, the four masked robbers rushed into the bank and held up the staff members and the customers at gunpoint.
• “Don’t move!” the robber bellowed. Silence hung in the air as time stood still. All the customers and staff members raised their trembling hands and crouched in fear.
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THATS SO COOL OMG I LOVE IT SORRY FOR MY BAD ENGLAND.
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ReplyDelete-Teacher
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Very detailed, love it!
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