Thursday, October 7, 2010

Blackout and chaos

Blackout and chaos
• Without warning, the MRT train jerked to a halt and everything turned pitch dark. Panic invaded the carriage I was in. Some of the commuters screamed at the top of their voice and burst into tears. Fear ripped into my lungs, robbing me off all oxygen. I could hear my own pulses and my heart palpitating with the chilling fear that was setting in. The carriage was soon abuzz with nervous chatters and some lights from mobile phones illuminated the carriage.

• The train came into a sudden halt. The light in the carriage started flickering and the whole train was engulfed in darkness.

• The train was plunged into total darkness! The train was in total chaos and fear snaked around my heart as I adjust to the darkness.
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36 comments:

  1. Max IshootFireballs ChewMarch 31, 2011 at 7:03 AM

    These phrases are so useful!Did a kid write this?Its good for essays on fear.

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    1. cloudygirrrlJuly 5, 2018 at 6:09 AM

      this is from a 16 year old girl taking o-levels.

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    2. AnonymousJanuary 24, 2019 at 6:16 AM

      why does everything has a train?

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    3. UnknownOctober 10, 2019 at 8:56 AM

      👍

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    4. SunChaserSeptember 14, 2020 at 2:05 AM

      Good phrases! It really helped me with my composition! Thanks a lot! :)

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  2. Yoke HanDecember 23, 2011 at 8:19 PM

    It is good...But if you can put more beautiful phrases,it will be better

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  3. cloudshadowApril 26, 2012 at 5:46 AM

    Do you have any smoke phrases?

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    1. Tiew WXApril 19, 2013 at 7:54 PM

      Smoke wafted through the train, causing me to cough and sputter.

      This might help you.

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    2. AnonymousMay 3, 2014 at 8:00 PM

      HOW?

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    3. AnonymousJuly 15, 2014 at 7:16 AM

      really!?

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  4. UnknownSeptember 25, 2012 at 6:10 AM

    the first para graphs elaborate a lot!

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  5. UnknownOctober 10, 2012 at 12:18 AM

    Do you have any phrases about 2 mischievous boys smashing the glass of the fire alarm? It would be really helpful if you could post it. Thanks

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    1. Aleissa MacKenzieSeptember 25, 2019 at 3:04 AM

      Hi Britney Thong, I'm Aleissa and I've just written a composition on the boys smashing the protective glass of the fire alarm a couple weeks ago for a major examination in my highschool. If you like I can type the entire thing for you...

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    2. ANONYMUS LOLMay 24, 2023 at 10:09 AM

      pls do that

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  6. CherylApril 19, 2013 at 2:53 AM

    This is just what I need.Thanks

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  7. MadhuApril 20, 2013 at 8:40 PM

    The exact thing!thnkx!!!

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  8. AnonymousApril 21, 2013 at 12:33 AM

    ThxxXXXXXXXXXX

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  9. FaithApril 27, 2013 at 2:28 AM

    This is really useful. thanks

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  10. AnonymousApril 27, 2013 at 7:30 PM

    The first para is the best

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  11. AnonymousMay 4, 2013 at 7:37 AM

    what I really needed!

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  12. AnonymousJuly 14, 2013 at 12:51 AM

    Really useful. Thanks a lot!:) ^^

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  13. AnonymousAugust 5, 2013 at 3:20 AM

    ^^ just what i needed for my composition! :D

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  14. AnonymousSeptember 18, 2013 at 6:33 AM

    Thanks,you have completed the start of my homework XD!!!

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  15. AnonymousSeptember 29, 2013 at 9:37 PM

    Thank you, it is very helpful but maybe you might want to post more then it will be great.

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  16. AnonymousOctober 3, 2013 at 1:25 AM

    Good! It is very helpful!!

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  17. AnonymousOctober 3, 2013 at 1:27 AM

    It might be of some help to my compo, but you may want to consider to post more of such helpful phrases and paragraphs!

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  18. AnonymousOctober 8, 2013 at 7:01 AM

    My exams are tomorrow. Gosh! Any phrases by tomorrow morning before 5.30am?

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  19. AnonymousFebruary 25, 2014 at 5:25 AM

    i usually say this to most people ...add more action and beutiful phrases but to you i say one word,perfect

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  20. AnonymousJuly 5, 2021 at 5:36 AM

    thank u so much. U helped a lot

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